Death Struck

OKay  here's the book FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please comment so I could see wat I'm doing wrong.


                                       Chapter One
                Welcome to "Death Struck"


           This isn't your actual life of an American Teenager. Living in a godforsaken place where life is getting ready to end at any moment.

          Enough complaining. Names Alexis Matthew Scorner. Kind of a corny last name right? Blame the idiots who made me who now are vice presidents of an organ company that sells them for a price. Now here's the reason why: Our population is 3,125 in Demer( I call it Death Struck.... long story). But the map says we only have 325 people in Demer, now do the math....which one is right? The map. Why? because there IS actually 325 people in Demer, only problem is that we add the dead to our population. Creepy right? That's not all. We arte divided by class: Low class, Middle class and high class ( where I am).  Some of us are happy of where we stand.....only thing is.... O2!!! High class collects a lot. We just are a picky bunch aren't we? Exactly why 50% of Demer has to wear gas masks and a oxygen tank.

         It's not a gift if that's what's you are thinking, it's a curse. The government get's rich off of things that will make your stomach churn. It's not like we just have to have these things......we NEED these things or we will be wiped of the earth.

        Thinking twice about coming here? I wish I was you.